lost and found
FairsCaPe ...has no life. -Dirk the Feeble
someone
has taken my life
it's gone
this life
I've been left
in return
is entirely
the wrong style
wrong shape
wrong color
I had it all
glorious mornings by the sea
fulfilling days of meaningful work
passionate nights of intimate perfection
if you know what I mean
perhaps someone
has taken your life
or
perhaps
you have found mine
if you have
please get in touch
let me know
I'll come by to pick it up
first thing in the morning
no questions asked
someone
has taken my life
it's gone
this life
I've been left
in return
is entirely
the wrong style
wrong shape
wrong color
I had it all
glorious mornings by the sea
fulfilling days of meaningful work
passionate nights of intimate perfection
if you know what I mean
perhaps someone
has taken your life
or
perhaps
you have found mine
if you have
please get in touch
let me know
I'll come by to pick it up
first thing in the morning
no questions asked
posted by CCCCppppCCppp at 5/03/2006 09:05:00 AM
2 Comments:
Some of your stuff is really very good. Like the well one and this one. I really enjoy their sense of rhythm and they work well.
E
The poetic experience is a subjective one. I'm glad you found some thing in these poems that resonated in you.
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